Revelations
Undulate and flow
In the still dawn
Glistening in the moonlight
And settling upon the rooftops
Of the weary
Their secrets echoing
In dormant ears
Morning rustles her skirt
And they scatter
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10 comments:
beautiful! a lot of simple presence in this poem.
This is just my kind of poem: defined images, succinct powerful words chosen with care. Well done once more :)
You steadily manage to astound me with such crisp imagery. Keep them coming!!! Brilliantly written!!!
This is a nice one.."Their secrets echoing
In dormant ears
Morning rustles her skirt
And they scatter"
Write Girl, I've tagged you for a nice meme. Visit my blog to participate. Cheers!!!
"Glistening in the moonlight
And settling upon the rooftops"
Loved this line!!
Thumbs up!
This is a wonderful poem it is with knowledge that relevation is passed and if we are not careful it will scatter..very insightful:)
Incredible writing! Just amazing!
i loved the imagery !!
You are very good. nice job
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