Saturday, February 27, 2010

Comets (Acrostic)

Celestial wonder of eyes
Orbits the midnight skies
Magnificent tail of dust
Evokes the distant galaxies
Trajectory course yet unknown
Stunning bursts of universe




Posted for: Acrostic Only

9 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Wow..this is nice..flows perfectly..In fact this is what it reminds me of-
I just saw a really terrific photo..check it out here-
http://darkerview.com/darkview/index.php?/archives/1619-Postcard-from-the-Universe-Rosette.html
Have a great weekend-

Kay said...

well done.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

An outstanding acrostic!

Cynthia said...

Hello Write Girl, this acrostic is positively
mind-altering! Quite metaphysical.

Opaque said...

Very well done! I love the metaphors!

septembermom said...

Perfect acrostic!

JStar said...

Your talent speaks for itself!!!! Your words touches my heart deep down...

C Will said...

Hey WG,
You have captured this magnificently.!!:p well done!!

Saadi said...

Ur description could actually be used in a text-book!!!!

Awesome-ness!!!