Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Aura (O.S.I)

Her aura was addictive
Rippling like moonlight on water
Bubbling over in a glass flute
Her essence spilling in his mind
Intoxicating the evening
Her face dipping low against his collar
Red lips pressing against white
Lashes part into a brown sunrise
Indigo lace shifts like the sky
Emerald heels hoisted on his lap
Arms encircling her, he laughs
Her aroma drifting like autumn winds
A candle flickering only for him
He unravels her frame
To unearth her aura
Posted for O.S.I.

18 comments:

Mojo said...

wow. what an image. what a beautiful image. soft and warm and sensual. *sigh* wonderfully done.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Ha..this is pretty wild! Nice job with bright and colorful lines!!

SandyCarlson said...

Lovely, warm, and beautiful.

Anonymous said...

Loved it!

"Her essence spilling in his mind"

Nalini Hebbar said...

lovely...great imagery...hot too!

Aayushi Mehta said...

Wonderful and quite sensual!

JStar said...

Her Aura is intoxicating :)

Loch Rob said...

I agree. I warm, sensual piece here. Your writing invokes nice visual images. Passionate!

Quiet Paths said...

All the sense are awakened reading this piece! Lovely and playful.

Opaque said...

This is very lovely.

Kay said...

I love this...slightly a commitment phobia for myself, so it's somewhat frightening, but man-oh-man, to have that man ;) beautiful...her aura was addictive...

Kcalpesh said...

I got completely lost into my imagination and visualized the scene you've narrated in your poem! Awesome words....

I have recommended your blog to my friends!

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septembermom said...

Well done. Love all the imagery, my friend.

C Will said...

Hey WG,
This one has a lot of sizzle and pop love the imagery well done!!:p

Robin said...

Love it! Beautiful details...so evocative.

Julie said...

wow! gorgeous!

workerv said...

Very special, one of your best!

Saadi said...

I know I've said this before..but still....BEAUTIFUL!!!