Move where the currents stir you
Wait patiently for the face of time
Welcome waves when they beguile you
Be cautious to opening your borders
Explore the limitless glory of the universe
You cannot reach your destination without a compass
Be joyous and carefree
Many tasks and chores await you
The universe is your canvas to paint upon
There isn’t a brush big enough to capture it
Stretch your arms towards the stars
How long until we reach our destination
Pour out all your love like rain
Be careful who you give your heart to
Strike the flames of passion and let it burn
A scented candle is much safer
Endless thoughts and contradictions
Alas, the heart is filled with hesitation
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18 comments:
Beautiful verses. Interesting oxymorons!
Wow..this was really sharp! Positive yet with a lot of wisdom! Excellent job!!
Wow....!!! I said wow...and I mean it so...what form of poetry is this!
I like it girl...:)
You truly amazed me here!!!
Thanks for sharing dear! And thanks for your visit in my blog, too! Keep coming back please!
You expressed the feeling of hesitation very distinctly...wonderful take on the prompt!
Lovely, lovely, lovely. So deeply felt and expressed. Love it.
Melanie
One of your best! You went to the well.
Just beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
So True....So True...
You know I love the "universe is your canvas" one. Everything written here is wonderful. You have such a gift.
Clever use of prompt. It's a wonderful piece!
This is wonderful! Spot on.
Very wise usage here! I love the red lines! The redness adds to the feel! Well done!!!
Hey WG,
You are just brilliant you have transformed emotions into words and they move with such passion and feelings!! Love your beautiful mind!!!:)
I like the contradiction, what we thought and we want not to think collides so easily
Great, W.Girl! Polar positional thoughts to the max. I am for a happy medium, can there be one?
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Love the contradictions between the green and the red, beautiful.
Very creatively intepreted! Lots of different meanings on different levels- love that!
Oooh! Like the way you've done this:)
"Pour out all your love like rain
Be careful who you give your heart to"
stopped me dead in my tracks
and covered them right quick!
Ah, the hesitation in hesitation. Brilliant!
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