Hi bloggers,
Hope you all enjoyed the Thanksgiving weekend. I am posting this for One Single Impression. The theme this week is meld.
Melding sunset upon your face
Blues, reds, gold of light
Time itself sweetened by your embrace
Laughter in the hours of daylight
Blues, reds, gold of light
Time itself sweetened by your embrace
Laughter in the hours of daylight
Syllables rise, rhythm sparks
Lay awhile under the stars
Chasing shadows however far
Melding imagination in the wind
Thoughts loose like rolling skies
Swept upon the bed of dreams
Awakened on the knees of sunrise
17 comments:
This was wonderful poem. I enjoyed your use of description. Your words painted a perfect mental image.
Thoughts loose like rolling skies - a gorgeous image! Nice piece, to be sure...
..wonderful wonderful wonderful...
So elegantly written...I feel so much love and passion in this one
Hi WG.....my computer went down, wow,wow what
an ordeal, finaly cable go it up again. I am
worn out, i decided to treat myself and the
first thing i did was check you out...LOVE IT..
LOVE IT..LOVE IT...MADE MY DAY!
Hey WG,
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this poem what a feast for the imagination!!!! much love:p
lovely thoguths!
Great work. Especially love the last stanza
Beautiful!!!!
Excellent poem...
I love these lines too much...
"Melding imagination in the wind
Thoughts loose like rolling skies"
Thoughts loose like rolling skies..and you tie them in sentences to create wonderful poetry.. Girl..you really write so well... thanks
excellent
What a beautifully written poem- your images are melded together so wonderfully- thank you for this interpretation of the prompt.
Lovely poetic images, kneaded by your words...
Time can be sweetened by an embrace. I am sure of it. Thanks for this poem.
Such a beautiful, visual poem. Very nice.
Thoughts loose like rolling skies - awesome. Love all the imagery here. Speaks to me beautifully. Thank you!
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