Sunday, November 28, 2010

O.S.I.: Meld

Hi bloggers,

Hope you all enjoyed the Thanksgiving weekend. I am posting this for One Single Impression. The theme this week is meld.

Melding sunset upon your face
Blues, reds, gold of light
Time itself sweetened by your embrace
Laughter in the hours of daylight

Melding your poetry after dark
Syllables rise, rhythm sparks
Lay awhile under the stars
Chasing shadows however far


Melding imagination in the wind
Thoughts loose like rolling skies
Swept upon the bed of dreams
Awakened on the knees of sunrise





17 comments:

Poets United said...

This was wonderful poem. I enjoyed your use of description. Your words painted a perfect mental image.

Tumblewords: said...

Thoughts loose like rolling skies - a gorgeous image! Nice piece, to be sure...

ms pie said...

..wonderful wonderful wonderful...

JStar said...

So elegantly written...I feel so much love and passion in this one

workerv said...

Hi WG.....my computer went down, wow,wow what
an ordeal, finaly cable go it up again. I am
worn out, i decided to treat myself and the
first thing i did was check you out...LOVE IT..
LOVE IT..LOVE IT...MADE MY DAY!

C Will said...

Hey WG,
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this poem what a feast for the imagination!!!! much love:p

sandra said...

lovely thoguths!

Felicity said...

Great work. Especially love the last stanza

Kyarii in Wonderland said...

Beautiful!!!!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Excellent poem...

I love these lines too much...
"Melding imagination in the wind
Thoughts loose like rolling skies"

Ramesh Sood said...

Thoughts loose like rolling skies..and you tie them in sentences to create wonderful poetry.. Girl..you really write so well... thanks

Ian said...

excellent

Patti said...

What a beautifully written poem- your images are melded together so wonderfully- thank you for this interpretation of the prompt.

1manview said...

Lovely poetic images, kneaded by your words...

SandyCarlson said...

Time can be sweetened by an embrace. I am sure of it. Thanks for this poem.

Teresa said...

Such a beautiful, visual poem. Very nice.

septembermom said...

Thoughts loose like rolling skies - awesome. Love all the imagery here. Speaks to me beautifully. Thank you!