Thursday, November 11, 2010

Thinking (Acrostic Only)

Hi all,

This post is written for Acrostic Only.

Thoughts desperate and loose
Harping her corner blues
Inclining on moon wings
Notes on silver strings
Knitting in night hour
Illuminating dreams lay sour
Naked night slowly bends
Gyrating pendulum never ends

7 comments:

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

Now this is thinking ... love the opening line ...

Jim said...

Your rhyme was so good in the poem below, especially with those short lines! Now here you've have five of your lines starting with present participle words.
This is a wonderful acrostic too. So much turmoil in her thoughts. I am trying to read her mood. Anxious and frustrated for sure.
To me you are playfully putting the words together like you would build a toy of legos pieces.
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JStar said...

Great way of thinking

septembermom said...

Moves wonderfully. Great one once again! I like "corner blues."

Kilauea Poetry said...

Well this is sharp..but not surprised!! I love inclining on moon wings- and my favorite is the ending stanza- happy weekend to you:)

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

wonderful thinking acrostic has an Alice in
Wonderland quality to it!

Sonshu said...

Beautifully written, like a wonderfully spun dream!